In this story I worked on using interesting sentences with joiners and correct capitals and full stops.
I feel really cold as I feel the bumby stons. As I feel the soft leaves,I hear the feet on the path. I feel the cold freezing wind as I hear the noisy children. As I hear the bridge creacing, I see the trees moving.
what an interesting exercise, Oliver, to go outside and look and listen and feel what is around you! great observation skills. It's important to take note of your surroundings. Mum
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