WRITING

In our writing workshop WALT use List sentence, Clause sentence, Direct speech sentence  and Dialogue sentencein our writing.  Here is a story that includes those things.

"Once apon a ti..." said man.

"Yeah yeah who cares about the once apon a time thing," said fat cow, as he sat on man. Man killed fat cow, and said "my bum, who was fat, farted... so oh see that."

There was a long and big fart coming from the shed. Man looked in and saw fat cows, dog looking pigs, fat men and a tiny dog.

"You lot are all fat." Shouted man,

"You are," said the fat lot of animals. Then man just died. So random. The animals chattered about dead man. Then out from the back of the shed came "bob the builder can you fix it, bob the builder no you can't !" Shouted bob the builder. A volcano erupted. Every one died. Then...

never mind the end. ('-'#)

Signed Man.